From b669529d6e5f08b349fbf5c82a29d56c7f764df7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: backwardsEric
Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2019 10:06:58 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 01/26] In English messages for things that return when thrown,
 inserted "come" before "back" in two places where it was missing.

---
 src/cmd2.c | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/cmd2.c b/src/cmd2.c
index 63df105a..89aaaa2b 100644
--- a/src/cmd2.c
+++ b/src/cmd2.c
@@ -2781,7 +2781,7 @@ bool do_cmd_throw(int mult, bool boomerang, OBJECT_IDX shuriken)
 			{
 				if (item >= 0)
 				{
-					msg_format(_("%sを受け損ねた！", "%s backs, but you can't catch!"), o2_name);
+					msg_format(_("%sを受け損ねた！", "%s comes back, but you can't catch!"), o2_name);
 				}
 				else
 				{
@@ -2793,7 +2793,7 @@ bool do_cmd_throw(int mult, bool boomerang, OBJECT_IDX shuriken)
 		}
 		else
 		{
-			msg_format(_("%sが返ってこなかった！", "%s doesn't back!"), o2_name);
+			msg_format(_("%sが返ってこなかった！", "%s doesn't come back!"), o2_name);
 		}
 	}
 
-- 
2.20.1 (Apple Git-117)


From 7e88ab0e9f14fa79a03351cb6f34dbf9d21238f0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: backwardsEric
Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2019 10:30:42 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 02/26] For the English messages about a cursed item summoning
 something, use "has attracted" rather than "have attracted" since the cursed
 item is singular (unless it's ammunition).

---
 src/dungeon.c | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/dungeon.c b/src/dungeon.c
index 79d66215..90c7fb71 100644
--- a/src/dungeon.c
+++ b/src/dungeon.c
@@ -2644,7 +2644,7 @@ static void process_world_aux_curse(void)
 				GAME_TEXT o_name[MAX_NLEN];
 
 				object_desc(o_name, choose_cursed_obj_name(TRC_CALL_ANIMAL), (OD_OMIT_PREFIX | OD_NAME_ONLY));
-				msg_format(_("%sが動物を引き寄せた！", "Your %s have attracted an animal!"), o_name);
+				msg_format(_("%sが動物を引き寄せた！", "Your %s has attracted an animal!"), o_name);
 				disturb(FALSE, TRUE);
 			}
 		}
@@ -2656,7 +2656,7 @@ static void process_world_aux_curse(void)
 				GAME_TEXT o_name[MAX_NLEN];
 
 				object_desc(o_name, choose_cursed_obj_name(TRC_CALL_DEMON), (OD_OMIT_PREFIX | OD_NAME_ONLY));
-				msg_format(_("%sが悪魔を引き寄せた！", "Your %s have attracted a demon!"), o_name);
+				msg_format(_("%sが悪魔を引き寄せた！", "Your %s has attracted a demon!"), o_name);
 				disturb(FALSE, TRUE);
 			}
 		}
@@ -2669,7 +2669,7 @@ static void process_world_aux_curse(void)
 				GAME_TEXT o_name[MAX_NLEN];
 
 				object_desc(o_name, choose_cursed_obj_name(TRC_CALL_DRAGON), (OD_OMIT_PREFIX | OD_NAME_ONLY));
-				msg_format(_("%sがドラゴンを引き寄せた！", "Your %s have attracted an dragon!"), o_name);
+				msg_format(_("%sがドラゴンを引き寄せた！", "Your %s has attracted an dragon!"), o_name);
 				disturb(FALSE, TRUE);
 			}
 		}
@@ -2682,7 +2682,7 @@ static void process_world_aux_curse(void)
 				GAME_TEXT o_name[MAX_NLEN];
 
 				object_desc(o_name, choose_cursed_obj_name(TRC_CALL_UNDEAD), (OD_OMIT_PREFIX | OD_NAME_ONLY));
-				msg_format(_("%sが死霊を引き寄せた！", "Your %s have attracted an undead!"), o_name);
+				msg_format(_("%sが死霊を引き寄せた！", "Your %s has attracted an undead!"), o_name);
 				disturb(FALSE, TRUE);
 			}
 		}
-- 
2.20.1 (Apple Git-117)


From b4a0d1ba208fed8a599ed2afa8bb1225f496a3bf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: backwardsEric
Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2019 10:37:30 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 03/26] Replaced "have waked" with "have woken".

---
 src/cmd-pet.c | 2 +-
 src/dungeon.c | 2 +-
 2 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/cmd-pet.c b/src/cmd-pet.c
index a9013652..859dd33e 100644
--- a/src/cmd-pet.c
+++ b/src/cmd-pet.c
@@ -348,7 +348,7 @@ bool do_riding(bool force)
 			GAME_TEXT m_name[MAX_NLEN];
 			monster_desc(m_name, m_ptr, 0);
 			(void)set_monster_csleep(g_ptr->m_idx, 0);
-			msg_format(_("%sを起こした。", "You have waked %s up."), m_name);
+			msg_format(_("%sを起こした。", "You have woken %s up."), m_name);
 		}
 
 		if (p_ptr->action == ACTION_KAMAE) set_action(ACTION_NONE);
diff --git a/src/dungeon.c b/src/dungeon.c
index 90c7fb71..2575eb3a 100644
--- a/src/dungeon.c
+++ b/src/dungeon.c
@@ -4739,7 +4739,7 @@ static void process_player(void)
 			/* Recover fully */
 			(void)set_monster_csleep(p_ptr->riding, 0);
 			monster_desc(m_name, m_ptr, 0);
-			msg_format(_("%^sを起こした。", "You have waked %s up."), m_name);
+			msg_format(_("%^sを起こした。", "You have woken %s up."), m_name);
 		}
 
 		if (MON_STUNNED(m_ptr))
-- 
2.20.1 (Apple Git-117)


From a8bffb220fd0229a180661692aebd009fdadc3c5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: backwardsEric
Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2019 10:44:13 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 04/26] Use "afraid" rather than "fear" in English message
 since it's being used as an ajdective.

---
 src/dungeon.c | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/src/dungeon.c b/src/dungeon.c
index 2575eb3a..56b989a6 100644
--- a/src/dungeon.c
+++ b/src/dungeon.c
@@ -4774,7 +4774,7 @@ static void process_player(void)
 			{
 				GAME_TEXT m_name[MAX_NLEN];
 				monster_desc(m_name, m_ptr, 0);
-				msg_format(_("%^sを恐怖から立ち直らせた。", "%^s is no longer fear."), m_name);
+				msg_format(_("%^sを恐怖から立ち直らせた。", "%^s is no longer afraid."), m_name);
 			}
 		}
 
-- 
2.20.1 (Apple Git-117)


From 9a3aa1e874aaad234efeb54df8d29eaa4c723670 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: backwardsEric
Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2019 11:48:58 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 05/26] For clearer English, replaced "informations of" with
 "information about".

---
 src/gameoption.c | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/gameoption.c b/src/gameoption.c
index 78779fcd..70e6728e 100644
--- a/src/gameoption.c
+++ b/src/gameoption.c
@@ -158,7 +158,7 @@ bool record_sell;	/* Record sold items */
 bool record_danger;	/* Record hitpoint warning */
 bool record_arena;	/* Record arena victories */
 bool record_ident;	/* Record first identified items */
-bool record_named_pet;	/* Record informations of named pets */
+bool record_named_pet;	/* Record information about named pets */
 char record_o_name[MAX_NLEN];
 GAME_TURN record_turn;
 
@@ -565,7 +565,7 @@ const option_type option_info[] =
 	"record_ident",                 _("未判明のアイテムの識別を記録する", "Record first identified items") },
 
 	{ &record_named_pet,            FALSE, OPT_PAGE_PLAYRECORD, 4, 23,
-	"record_named_pet",             _("名前つきペットの情報を記録する", "Record informations of named pets") },
+	"record_named_pet",             _("名前つきペットの情報を記録する", "Record information about named pets") },
 
 /*** End of Table ***/
 
-- 
2.20.1 (Apple Git-117)


From 2ec1eb5f3238ecf9ce227a2afe65ce98b60558e1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: backwardsEric
Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2019 12:22:42 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 06/26] For the English message regarding KATA_IAI, matched
 verb tenses.

---
 src/melee1.c | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/src/melee1.c b/src/melee1.c
index 428927a1..65f07bc4 100644
--- a/src/melee1.c
+++ b/src/melee1.c
@@ -1930,7 +1930,7 @@ bool make_attack_normal(MONSTER_IDX m_idx)
 
 	if (p_ptr->special_defense & KATA_IAI)
 	{
-		msg_format(_("相手が襲いかかる前に素早く武器を振るった。", "You took sen, draw and cut in one motion before %s move."), m_name);
+		msg_format(_("相手が襲いかかる前に素早く武器を振るった。", "You took sen, drew and cut in one motion before %s moved."), m_name);
 		if (py_attack(m_ptr->fy, m_ptr->fx, HISSATSU_IAI)) return TRUE;
 	}
 
-- 
2.20.1 (Apple Git-117)


From b606309bdbd474cae2088eeefb3fb299874d41cd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: backwardsEric
Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2019 12:29:24 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 07/26] Use "enveloping" rather than "enveloped" since the
 action is occuring in the present rather than the past.

---
 src/melee1.c | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/src/melee1.c b/src/melee1.c
index 65f07bc4..4027413b 100644
--- a/src/melee1.c
+++ b/src/melee1.c
@@ -3455,7 +3455,7 @@ bool make_attack_normal(MONSTER_IDX m_idx)
 						/* Modify the damage */
 						dam = mon_damage_mod(m_ptr, dam, FALSE);
 
-						msg_format(_("影のオーラが%^sに反撃した！", "Enveloped shadows attack %^s."), m_name);
+						msg_format(_("影のオーラが%^sに反撃した！", "Enveloping shadows attack %^s."), m_name);
 						if (mon_take_hit(m_idx, dam, &fear, _("は倒れた。", " is destroyed.")))
 						{
 							blinked = FALSE;
-- 
2.20.1 (Apple Git-117)


From 2a8c02f92e8c3d70a948a46b9b94b926e52a621e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: backwardsEric
Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2019 12:32:22 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 08/26] Converted English counterattack messsage to a full
 sentence.

---
 src/melee1.c | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/src/melee1.c b/src/melee1.c
index 4027413b..6c5359b9 100644
--- a/src/melee1.c
+++ b/src/melee1.c
@@ -3615,7 +3615,7 @@ bool make_attack_normal(MONSTER_IDX m_idx)
 		monster_desc(m_target_name, m_ptr, 0);
 
 		p_ptr->csp -= 7;
-		msg_format(_("%^sに反撃した！", "Your counterattack to %s!"), m_target_name);
+		msg_format(_("%^sに反撃した！", "You counterattacked %s!"), m_target_name);
 		py_attack(m_ptr->fy, m_ptr->fx, HISSATSU_COUNTER);
 		fear = FALSE;
 		p_ptr->redraw |= (PR_MANA);
-- 
2.20.1 (Apple Git-117)


From 9b81551573d9b77442eb9a0137974c880d8d81c2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: backwardsEric
Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2019 12:42:58 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 09/26] Inserted "been" in English message since the animal
 ridden is the one performing the action.

---
 src/monster-process.c | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/src/monster-process.c b/src/monster-process.c
index 9961d9d0..88635839 100644
--- a/src/monster-process.c
+++ b/src/monster-process.c
@@ -372,7 +372,7 @@ void mon_take_hit_mon(MONSTER_IDX m_idx, HIT_POINT dam, bool *dead, bool *fear,
 		if (m_ptr->hp > m_ptr->maxhp/3) dam = (dam + 1) / 2;
 		if (rakuba((dam > 200) ? 200 : dam, FALSE))
 		{
-			msg_format(_("%^sに振り落とされた！", "You have thrown off from %s!"), m_name);
+			msg_format(_("%^sに振り落とされた！", "You have been thrown off from %s!"), m_name);
 		}
 	}
 
-- 
2.20.1 (Apple Git-117)


From 93df6879a87ea07b07a7e2b3a47bc233e5dfe702 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: backwardsEric
Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2019 12:44:08 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 10/26] Changed second half of riding message in English to be
 a second action rather than a participle.

---
 src/monster-process.c | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/src/monster-process.c b/src/monster-process.c
index 88635839..556642a0 100644
--- a/src/monster-process.c
+++ b/src/monster-process.c
@@ -2221,7 +2221,7 @@ void process_monster(MONSTER_IDX m_idx)
 			if (is_riding_mon && riding_pinch < 2)
 			{
 				msg_format(_("%sは傷の痛さの余りあなたの束縛から逃れようとしている。",
-							 "%^s seems to be in so much pain, and trying to escape from your restriction."), m_name);
+							 "%^s seems to be in so much pain and tries to escape from your restriction."), m_name);
 				riding_pinch++;
 				disturb(TRUE, TRUE);
 			}
-- 
2.20.1 (Apple Git-117)


From 35631dd8edfd989806717a60f73bf957621fc105 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: backwardsEric
Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2019 12:46:05 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 11/26] Modified teleport level English message for
 subject/verb agreement.

---
 src/monster-process.c | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/src/monster-process.c b/src/monster-process.c
index 556642a0..15080bff 100644
--- a/src/monster-process.c
+++ b/src/monster-process.c
@@ -2243,7 +2243,7 @@ void process_monster(MONSTER_IDX m_idx)
 					{
 						msg_format(_("%^s「ピンチだ！退却させてもらう！」", "%^s says 'It is the pinch! I will retreat'."), m_name);
 					}
-					msg_format(_("%^sがテレポート・レベルの巻物を読んだ。", "%^s read a scroll of teleport level."), m_name);
+					msg_format(_("%^sがテレポート・レベルの巻物を読んだ。", "%^s reads a scroll of teleport level."), m_name);
 					msg_format(_("%^sが消え去った。", "%^s disappears."), m_name);
 				}
 
-- 
2.20.1 (Apple Git-117)


From 443db77ef123296d3254904fa65301e5fc29b85f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: backwardsEric
Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2019 16:31:19 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 12/26] Reworded fully damaged English message - "crumple" is
 the wrong tense and doesn't seem like a good choice for the nature of the
 damge.

---
 src/player-damage.c | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/src/player-damage.c b/src/player-damage.c
index aa6a1ee8..393ebac8 100644
--- a/src/player-damage.c
+++ b/src/player-damage.c
@@ -369,7 +369,7 @@ static bool acid_minus_ac(void)
 	/* No damage left to be done */
 	if (o_ptr->ac + o_ptr->to_a <= 0)
 	{
-		msg_format(_("%sは既にボロボロだ！", "Your %s is already crumble!"), o_name);
+		msg_format(_("%sは既にボロボロだ！", "Your %s is already fully corroded!"), o_name);
 		return (FALSE);
 	}
 
-- 
2.20.1 (Apple Git-117)


From fd413634add3ebf2345104f96e36c5558a0e46c7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: backwardsEric
Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2019 17:01:27 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 13/26] Reworded English message for lapsing of "swords to
 vampires" since "thirsty" is an adjective but was used as a noun.

---
 src/realm-hex.c | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/src/realm-hex.c b/src/realm-hex.c
index cec53ac4..6d9fedec 100644
--- a/src/realm-hex.c
+++ b/src/realm-hex.c
@@ -973,7 +973,7 @@ concptr do_hex_spell(SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mode)
 #ifdef JP
 			msg_print("武器の渇望が消え去った。");
 #else
-			msg_format("Thirsty of weapon%s disappeared.", (empty_hands(FALSE)) ? "" : "s");
+			msg_format("Your weapon%s less thirsty now.", (empty_hands(FALSE)) ? " is" : "s are");
 #endif
 		}
 		break;
-- 
2.20.1 (Apple Git-117)


From 6c0bc29ea6a05c3ec0f3d4bb005eaa31fb2ae087 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: backwardsEric
Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2019 17:04:06 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 14/26] Added a preposition and swapped another for a more
 idiomatic English message when the player does not have the "revenge
 sentence" power.

---
 src/realm-hex.c | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/src/realm-hex.c b/src/realm-hex.c
index 6d9fedec..f740003d 100644
--- a/src/realm-hex.c
+++ b/src/realm-hex.c
@@ -1095,7 +1095,7 @@ concptr do_hex_spell(SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mode)
 				}
 				else
 				{
-					msg_print(_("復讐する気が失せた。", "You are not a mood to revenge."));
+					msg_print(_("復讐する気が失せた。", "You are not in the mood for revenge."));
 				}
 				HEX_REVENGE_POWER(p_ptr) = 0;
 			}
-- 
2.20.1 (Apple Git-117)


From 80e5d6df7009563a1fc09dd4982709c5c595b002 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: backwardsEric
Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2019 17:20:40 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 15/26] Use "hit" rather than "sticked on" for idiomatic
 English.

---
 src/shoot.c | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/src/shoot.c b/src/shoot.c
index 6fec3ca4..88b106eb 100644
--- a/src/shoot.c
+++ b/src/shoot.c
@@ -687,7 +687,7 @@ void exe_fire(INVENTORY_IDX item, object_type *j_ptr, SPELL_IDX snipe_type)
 							monster_desc(m_name, m_ptr, 0);
 
 							tdam = m_ptr->hp + 1;
-							msg_format(_("%sの急所に突き刺さった！", "Your shot sticked on a fatal spot of %s!"), m_name);
+							msg_format(_("%sの急所に突き刺さった！", "Your shot hit a fatal spot of %s!"), m_name);
 						}
 						else tdam = 1;
 					}
-- 
2.20.1 (Apple Git-117)


From 7eb0d98b677b2ec4116f77e686a7e1d031cb9089 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: backwardsEric
Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2019 17:23:07 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 16/26] For a more idiomatic English expression, switch "have
 stuck into" with "is stuck in".

---
 src/shoot.c | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/src/shoot.c b/src/shoot.c
index 88b106eb..dd25c816 100644
--- a/src/shoot.c
+++ b/src/shoot.c
@@ -744,7 +744,7 @@ void exe_fire(INVENTORY_IDX item, object_type *j_ptr, SPELL_IDX snipe_type)
 							monster_desc(m_name, m_ptr, 0);
 
 							stick_to = TRUE;
-							msg_format(_("%sは%sに突き刺さった！", "%^s have stuck into %s!"), o_name, m_name);
+							msg_format(_("%sは%sに突き刺さった！", "%^s is stuck in %s!"), o_name, m_name);
 						}
 
 						message_pain(c_mon_ptr->m_idx, tdam);
-- 
2.20.1 (Apple Git-117)


From d369f5e8aabb8a18e52731f9fb918039fbc156e2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: backwardsEric
Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2019 17:25:13 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 17/26] For more idiomatic English, replaced "have gone to"
 with "went"; don't need to use the past perfect tense here.

---
 src/shoot.c | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/src/shoot.c b/src/shoot.c
index dd25c816..043b33fe 100644
--- a/src/shoot.c
+++ b/src/shoot.c
@@ -834,7 +834,7 @@ void exe_fire(INVENTORY_IDX item, object_type *j_ptr, SPELL_IDX snipe_type)
 
 			if (!o_idx)
 			{
-				msg_format(_("%sはどこかへ行った。", "The %s have gone to somewhere."), o_name);
+				msg_format(_("%sはどこかへ行った。", "The %s went somewhere."), o_name);
 				if (object_is_fixed_artifact(q_ptr))
 				{
 					a_info[j_ptr->name1].cur_num = 0;
-- 
2.20.1 (Apple Git-117)


From f14e6583abed0a59ed20b98d1894466090944259 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: backwardsEric
Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2019 17:57:42 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 18/26] Switch to participle for English message about a
 creature blocking fishing; could replace "is standing" with "stands" if
 active voice is preferable here.

---
 src/spells-status.c | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/src/spells-status.c b/src/spells-status.c
index 07ed81f5..70e321ef 100644
--- a/src/spells-status.c
+++ b/src/spells-status.c
@@ -411,7 +411,7 @@ bool fishing(player_type *creature_ptr)
 	{
 		GAME_TEXT m_name[MAX_NLEN];
 		monster_desc(m_name, &current_floor_ptr->m_list[current_floor_ptr->grid_array[y][x].m_idx], 0);
-		msg_format(_("%sが邪魔だ！", "%^s is stand in your way."), m_name);
+		msg_format(_("%sが邪魔だ！", "%^s is standing in your way."), m_name);
 		free_turn(creature_ptr);
 		return FALSE;
 	}
-- 
2.20.1 (Apple Git-117)


From 14d2a812f4e1b71c43d4f8a03ab625fa8a0296f0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: backwardsEric
Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2019 18:02:01 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 19/26] Add missing "to" in English message from mitokohmon().

---
 src/spells-summon.c | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/src/spells-summon.c b/src/spells-summon.c
index 4acf80ae..b4abd5c4 100644
--- a/src/spells-summon.c
+++ b/src/spells-summon.c
@@ -422,7 +422,7 @@ void mitokohmon(void)
 	if (count)
 	{
 		msg_format(_("「者ども、ひかえおろう！！！このお方をどなたとこころえる。」",
-			"%^s says 'WHO do you think this person is! Bow your head, down your knees!'"), kakusan);
+			"%^s says 'WHO do you think this person is! Bow your head, down to your knees!'"), kakusan);
 		sukekaku = TRUE;
 		stun_monsters(120);
 		confuse_monsters(120);
-- 
2.20.1 (Apple Git-117)


From d51d058a90e31ec018f428efec97bfdad0e2c688 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: backwardsEric
Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2019 18:19:44 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 20/26] For more idiomatic English, replaced "was crashed" with
 "was shattered" for mirros and with "crumbled" for walls.

---
 src/spells1.c | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/spells1.c b/src/spells1.c
index 74880a7e..6b2dc64a 100644
--- a/src/spells1.c
+++ b/src/spells1.c
@@ -512,7 +512,7 @@ static bool project_f(MONSTER_IDX who, POSITION r, POSITION y, POSITION x, HIT_P
 		{
 			if (is_mirror_grid(g_ptr))
 			{
-				msg_print(_("鏡が割れた！", "The mirror was crashed!"));
+				msg_print(_("鏡が割れた！", "The mirror was shattered!"));
 				sound(SOUND_GLASS);
 				remove_mirror(y, x);
 				project(0, 2, y, x, p_ptr->lev / 2 + 5, GF_SHARDS, (PROJECT_GRID | PROJECT_ITEM | PROJECT_KILL | PROJECT_JUMP | PROJECT_NO_HANGEKI), -1);
@@ -522,7 +522,7 @@ static bool project_f(MONSTER_IDX who, POSITION r, POSITION y, POSITION x, HIT_P
 			{
 				if (known && (g_ptr->info & CAVE_MARK))
 				{
-					msg_format(_("%sが割れた！", "The %s was crashed!"), f_name + f_info[get_feat_mimic(g_ptr)].name);
+					msg_format(_("%sが割れた！", "The %s crumbled!"), f_name + f_info[get_feat_mimic(g_ptr)].name);
 					sound(SOUND_GLASS);
 				}
 
@@ -537,7 +537,7 @@ static bool project_f(MONSTER_IDX who, POSITION r, POSITION y, POSITION x, HIT_P
 		{
 			if (is_mirror_grid(g_ptr) && p_ptr->lev < 40)
 			{
-				msg_print(_("鏡が割れた！", "The mirror was crashed!"));
+				msg_print(_("鏡が割れた！", "The mirror was shattered!"));
 				sound(SOUND_GLASS);
 				remove_mirror(y, x);
 				project(0, 2, y, x, p_ptr->lev / 2 + 5, GF_SHARDS, (PROJECT_GRID | PROJECT_ITEM | PROJECT_KILL | PROJECT_JUMP | PROJECT_NO_HANGEKI), -1);
@@ -547,7 +547,7 @@ static bool project_f(MONSTER_IDX who, POSITION r, POSITION y, POSITION x, HIT_P
 			{
 				if (known && (g_ptr->info & CAVE_MARK))
 				{
-					msg_format(_("%sが割れた！", "The %s was crashed!"), f_name + f_info[get_feat_mimic(g_ptr)].name);
+					msg_format(_("%sが割れた！", "The %s crumbled!"), f_name + f_info[get_feat_mimic(g_ptr)].name);
 					sound(SOUND_GLASS);
 				}
 
-- 
2.20.1 (Apple Git-117)


From 500bb084b68de4ee4872e2cb6feb9e3b74b7dd74 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: backwardsEric
Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2019 18:30:20 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 21/26] For English message about uniques resisting
 discharging, changed infinitive to participle (it's used as an adjective),
 corrected subject/verb agreement for second verb, and dropped the comma since
 do not have two separate clauses (same nounwith two verbs).

---
 src/spells2.c | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/src/spells2.c b/src/spells2.c
index 6c22815f..81960210 100644
--- a/src/spells2.c
+++ b/src/spells2.c
@@ -2118,7 +2118,7 @@ void discharge_minion(void)
 		{
 			GAME_TEXT m_name[MAX_NLEN];
 			monster_desc(m_name, m_ptr, 0x00);
-			msg_format(_("%sは爆破されるのを嫌がり、勝手に自分の世界へと帰った。", "%^s resists to be blasted, and run away."), m_name);
+			msg_format(_("%sは爆破されるのを嫌がり、勝手に自分の世界へと帰った。", "%^s resists being blasted and runs away."), m_name);
 			delete_monster_idx(i);
 			continue;
 		}
-- 
2.20.1 (Apple Git-117)


From 7496d60129f320bfcb37e8ad68177c0190f4fb20 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: backwardsEric
Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2019 18:35:47 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 22/26] Inserted missing "been" in English message.

---
 src/spells2.c | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/src/spells2.c b/src/spells2.c
index 81960210..1ad0cba2 100644
--- a/src/spells2.c
+++ b/src/spells2.c
@@ -5133,7 +5133,7 @@ bool rodeo(player_type *creature_ptr)
 	}
 	else
 	{
-		msg_format(_("%sに振り落とされた！", "You have thrown off by %s."), m_name);
+		msg_format(_("%sに振り落とされた！", "You have been thrown off by %s."), m_name);
 		rakuba(1, TRUE);
 		/* 落馬処理に失敗してもとにかく乗馬解除 */
 		creature_ptr->riding = 0;
-- 
2.20.1 (Apple Git-117)


From e95919e5c69d51cdc7a2a7c7cec6bb6b5d8e3499 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: backwardsEric
Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2019 18:47:13 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 23/26] Removed unneeded capitalization in English message.

---
 src/spells3.c | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/src/spells3.c b/src/spells3.c
index 96a266e0..02905d2b 100644
--- a/src/spells3.c
+++ b/src/spells3.c
@@ -1213,7 +1213,7 @@ void brand_weapon(int brand_type)
 	{
 		if (flush_failure) flush();
 
-		msg_print(_("属性付加に失敗した。", "The Branding failed."));
+		msg_print(_("属性付加に失敗した。", "The branding failed."));
 		chg_virtue(V_ENCHANT, -2);
 	}
 	calc_android_exp();
-- 
2.20.1 (Apple Git-117)


From f780882415e82c12125700503e30a30394ef685a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: backwardsEric
Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2019 19:36:36 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 24/26] Corrected typo in English message.

---
 src/spells1.c | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/src/spells1.c b/src/spells1.c
index 6b2dc64a..ec2a897c 100644
--- a/src/spells1.c
+++ b/src/spells1.c
@@ -3331,7 +3331,7 @@ static bool project_m(MONSTER_IDX who, POSITION r, POSITION y, POSITION x, HIT_P
 				if (seen) obvious = TRUE;
 				if (genocide_aux(g_ptr->m_idx, dam, !who, (r_ptr->level + 1) / 2, _("モンスター消滅", "Genocide One")))
 				{
-					if (seen_msg) msg_format(_("%sは消滅した！", "%^s disappered!"), m_name);
+					if (seen_msg) msg_format(_("%sは消滅した！", "%^s disappeared!"), m_name);
 					chg_virtue(V_VITALITY, -1);
 					return TRUE;
 				}
-- 
2.20.1 (Apple Git-117)


From 24c55cdd9ea5aaa0df1e42c2c1bdfa0f2c08d2d7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: backwardsEric
Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2019 19:54:17 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 25/26] "information" is it's own plural so dropped the "s".

---
 src/util.c | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/src/util.c b/src/util.c
index b735f6a1..894fb65c 100644
--- a/src/util.c
+++ b/src/util.c
@@ -4094,7 +4094,7 @@ menu_naiyou menu_info[10][10] =
 		{"Identify symbol(/)", '/', TRUE},
 		{"Show prev messages(^p)", KTRL('P'), TRUE},
 		{"Current time(^t/')", KTRL('T'), TRUE},
-		{"Various informations(~)", '~', TRUE},
+		{"Various information(~)", '~', TRUE},
 		{"Play record menu(|)", '|', TRUE},
 		{"", 0, FALSE}
 	},
-- 
2.20.1 (Apple Git-117)


From c0a383cd2e2103b3e560a3e8d7d935b1ec1276ba Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: backwardsEric
Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2019 20:04:24 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 26/26] Changed "confusing" to "confused" in two places since
 the monster is confused rather than causing the player to be confused.

---
 src/xtra2.c | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/xtra2.c b/src/xtra2.c
index e09e2f5d..33deb9ff 100644
--- a/src/xtra2.c
+++ b/src/xtra2.c
@@ -1750,7 +1750,7 @@ bool get_direction(DIRECTION *dp, bool allow_under, bool with_steed)
 			monster_desc(m_name, m_ptr, 0);
 			if (MON_CONFUSED(m_ptr))
 			{
-				msg_format(_("%sは混乱している。", "%^s is confusing."), m_name);
+				msg_format(_("%sは混乱している。", "%^s is confused."), m_name);
 			}
 			else
 			{
@@ -1895,7 +1895,7 @@ bool get_rep_dir(DIRECTION *dp, bool under)
 			monster_desc(m_name, m_ptr, 0);
 			if (MON_CONFUSED(m_ptr))
 			{
-				msg_format(_("%sは混乱している。", "%^s is confusing."), m_name);
+				msg_format(_("%sは混乱している。", "%^s is confused."), m_name);
 			}
 			else
 			{
-- 
2.20.1 (Apple Git-117)